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Thursday, September 17, 2009

Chapter 1: The Sound of the Shell-Piggy

The island is a forest like place with a mountain and pink rocks. It had a square motif on the

landscape. We got in a bad crash and got stuck on this deserted island in the middle of nowhere. I

know my asthma is gonna act up. I'm just stuck here, my parents are dead, my face is tow, I can't see

my auntie and Ralph is kinda mean calling me Piggy. I told him not to. That's why I think Ralph is

not fit to be a friend yet. In the morning, I make sure that I do my matins. Jack is a big jerk. All of our guardians

sent us on a plane by ourselves. The conch is the thing we used to call the other kids. The owner if the conch is

the chief aka Ralph. Some of the boys in the choir are jerks in togs because they like Jack, the biggest jerk I've

ever met. Their job is to help us hunt. I wish I could be leader, but Ralph looks like he would have more

experience, and I have Asthma and I can’t swim. Even though I don't like Ralph that much, I think he should be

leader because of his boxer body build, leadership personality, and he blew the conch. But he only knows

how because I told him how to. When I told him that I was sad when he told everyone my name was Piggy, his

face was pallor. I wish I could have been chief, but my Asthma.

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