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Monday, September 28, 2009

Chapter 4: Painted Faces and Long Hair - Ralph

On the island, we're all not used to having no parents. We all just have belligerence. The

littluns are all blatant. All they do is run around and play in the sand. They just fool around and

play. They don't do any work or help us out with hunting. They just act impalpable. We paint

our faces for the swarthiness because of camouflage. This foreshadows the darkness that

animals can't see us because we so dark. When my face is painted, I feel like a warrior. I feel like

I'm im charge. The ship didn't see us because no one waved it out or screamed like me. Jack was

so happy just because he killed a pig, that he couldn't keep an eye open for the fire. Then he got

in a fight with Piggy. Piggy looked at him very malevolently after this happened. I take charge

with the boys when I tell Jac kwhat to do and to make him apologize to Piggy for hitting him and

knocking his specs.

Thursday, September 24, 2009

Chapter 3: Huts on the Beach - Jack

Why should the little kids have shelter? They should get used to the cold nights and let us older

kids sleep in shelter. They are to help with the shelters and to find food for everyone. They aren't

carried out because I told them to not. The most important thing to do for survival is to hunt and

find food for yourself to eat, and maybe get enough food for everyone. Simon isn't afraid to stand

up for himself or others. He has a mop head. If we don't get rescued, we might eat everything that

we could. We might have to start eating non-edible stuff, maybe even cannibalism. Ralph thinks he

so tough because he is the chief. He thinks he can run everything and every person. I bet by the

time i get off of this island, we still won't get along.

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Chapter 2: Fire on the Mountain - Simon

I think that this is a very good island because it is such a piece of work, but it has snotty kids. The

beastie is a snake-like thing that was in the dream of a little kid. It symbolizes that we should be

careful whenever were by ourselves in the woods. It makes me feel weird and careful. I think that

hopefully someone would save us that saw us get shot down. I want to get rescued so I can go back

to my own life. We started a fire in the woods with dry stuff from trees. The little boy got burnt up

in a woods fire. I actually stand up for people and speak up for myself. At night, I just can't help to

think, what is everyone I love doing right not? Are they trying to find us? I just can't wait to see

them.

Thursday, September 17, 2009

Chapter 1: The Sound of the Shell-Piggy

The island is a forest like place with a mountain and pink rocks. It had a square motif on the

landscape. We got in a bad crash and got stuck on this deserted island in the middle of nowhere. I

know my asthma is gonna act up. I'm just stuck here, my parents are dead, my face is tow, I can't see

my auntie and Ralph is kinda mean calling me Piggy. I told him not to. That's why I think Ralph is

not fit to be a friend yet. In the morning, I make sure that I do my matins. Jack is a big jerk. All of our guardians

sent us on a plane by ourselves. The conch is the thing we used to call the other kids. The owner if the conch is

the chief aka Ralph. Some of the boys in the choir are jerks in togs because they like Jack, the biggest jerk I've

ever met. Their job is to help us hunt. I wish I could be leader, but Ralph looks like he would have more

experience, and I have Asthma and I can’t swim. Even though I don't like Ralph that much, I think he should be

leader because of his boxer body build, leadership personality, and he blew the conch. But he only knows

how because I told him how to. When I told him that I was sad when he told everyone my name was Piggy, his

face was pallor. I wish I could have been chief, but my Asthma.